When pictures go bad

Sometimes, not matter how hard I try I draw an image so unbelievably awful that I feel like destroying it. This image was one of those. I've posted it because I believe that I should keep all the bad drawings - and learn from them.

First of all - I'm not very good at portraits in any medium so I didn't expect this to be brilliant. The end result was more dissapointing than I expected it to be however. The subject was a friend of mine.

I accept the fact that I made a fair few mistakes with this one - and it's to be expected when I'm drawing in pen anyway. It's a permanent medium and therefore unforgiving when I make drastic mistakes. One of the mistakes in this one I tried to cover up but just ended up making it worse (hint - look for a particularly dark area).

Here's my critique (so you know why I hate it):

Proportion: The eyes are slightly too large

Proportion: The nose isn't wide enough

Proportion: Because the nose wasn't right, the mouth isn't wide enough

Proportion: The lips are too full

Shading: Too scribbly instead of clean cross-hatching

Shading: Possibly too dark - definitely in places.

Shading: I screwed up the shading on one side of the mouth

Error: I've made the subject look slightly cross eyed (oops)

Media: The damn pen started making blobby marks during the shading. I guess it serves me right for not using a decent drawing pen. Sorry Crayola Roller, I don't love you anymore.

I should probably stay away from portraits as they're so clearly not my strong point but I guess they never will be unless I keep trying to do them.

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